My Magazine Proposal Presentation + Feedback

Feedback Reflection

What Went Well - Many of my peers agreed that the price was good because it gives the magazine enough prestige for it to be popular, while also being cheap enough for my younger target audience to purchase regularly

How To Improve - The masthead needs to include features that connote the Hip Hop genre to show that it is not a grime magazine. In order to solve this issue, I am thinking about including a dollar sign to make it clear to readers that it is a Hip Hop magazine